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Clause # 1 Problem: **Prevention of Underage Drinking** Proposes to improve the security in all pubs and discos. This can be done by putting some restrictions/limitations on alcohol. In addition, the situation can ameliorate with the assistance of a large number of guards whom supervise everybody. (Jacqueline)

Clause # 2 Problem: **Prevention of Underage Drinking and other Drug Uses** Suggests to stop the selling of drugs and alcohol to people under a specific age (only adults). If this idea passes, it could be adopted in all stores. This would prevent many young people from experiencing harmful and damaging episodes, that can also cause severe/serious problems. (Jacqueline)

EDIT by Lorenzo: The content of your clauses is good, it is better than average. However, as other people, you got the format wrong. The clause does not have to be written in separate sentences, but should rather be written as just a part of a single sentence. In fact, a resolution is a many-page sentence. Here's what the first clause would look like using the correct format:

1. **__Proposes__** an improvement in security in all pubs and discos to ameliorate the problem, which would be achieved through: a) Government legislation, such as restrictions on alcohol, (BTW, this is a bit vague) b) An increase in the number of guards who supervise everybody within the spaces mentioned above;

One more thing: You need to be very specific, or at least have answers to many questions. Would this initiative come from governments, UN organizations, or non-governmental organizations? Who funds the increased amount of guards? (The disco owners, the government, the UN?)